This is a great, great track. It really shows your influences, but at the same time puts your personal stamp on it.
The atmospheric illbient background sounds are great and really build up the track well.
I would love to see a variation on the same theme - sort of like how FSOL used to release their singles - where you could have many takes on the same basic idea, but with radically different takes.
This is absolutely great though - thanks for sharing.